add emotion to your story.that will help,explode that moment,poop,make everything flow together,make sure it makes sense.,add details and explain things,use strong dialogue,figurtive laugege,exploding that moment,explode the moment,add more detail if you have more magic,don't add magical elements out of nowher,have a lot of details,add details and ex,iuycfwe ewvv9bo98ialuer pijkfdvfvnf sda;,baals,